Developmental Editing
I've been a writer for 15+ years, and have helped many authors with developmental edits as a critique partner. Although the initial draft is where the magic of story begins, the editing process is where the true alchemy is made. And it's at this critical stage when a writer needs an editor.
With a great eye for detail, I'll help you keep those pesky story threads together, push you to dig deeper to unlock your story's greatest potential for your targeted audience, and offer compassionate criticism that uncovers your story's strengths and weaknesses.
Some things I'm effective at:
* Fixing pacing issues
*keeping tension tight throughout the story
*uncovering missing/poorly placed story beats
*digging deeper into character wounds/motivations
*highlighting writing mechanics that weaken the story
*enhancing emotion in key scenes so readers connect
*fleshing out world building
*and many more!
Favorite genres include:
Anything with fantasy (low or high, any subgenre). Anything with romance (the spicier the better, but will welcome lower spice levels). Anything mystery. Horror. Won't cringe at dark elements (as long as it serves the plot and isn't just for shock value).
If you're interested in working with me, book below!
PRICING: 0.0095 CAD per word / 0.007 USD per word
PAYMENT: Canadian e-transfer / International through Wise
Half deposit upon booking confirmation / other half upon completion
TIME FRAME: Depending on word count.
Booking one project per month.
Testimonials
Kelly Cain, Romance Author
"I've had the privilege of working closely with Jamie McLachlan for the past 10+ years, and I can confidently say she brings both discernment and intuition to every project she reviews. She doesn't just point out what isn't working, she helps the author understand why and how to fix it in a way that strengthens the story. Her feedback is considerate, clear, and constructive.
If you're looking for someone who can coach your work to its best version, you won't find a better editor."